"Shadows Behind the Smile"

Prompt: Big madam hosts a photo shoot for all her friends to come to her dorm room and see Suzuya in adorable outfits. It costed money but people paid and cheered as Suzuya came out in all types of pretty dresses looking like a star, Suzuya put on a fake smile but he felt lifeless going through the motions. After they all left Big madam kissed Suzuya and picked him up spinning around the room before biting his lip. The next day at school Suzuya felt nauseous like he was going to throw up, Hanbee instantly picked up in Suzuya discomfort and took Suzuya to the bathroom where Suzuya puked up water and the little bit of breakfast Big madam allowed him to eat which was a granola bar. Suzuya passed out and Hanbee panicked trying to wake him up. He ended up calling Nakarai for help. He brought Mikage and Tamaki along and they brought him to Hanbee’s dorm room and placed him on the bed as Suzuya started to breathe heavily. Hanbee started to freak out thinking he was seizing but Nakarai told him to shut up as Tamaki felt Suzuya forehead as he was burning up. Suzuya woke up the second he felt the tug on his school blazer, they tried to calm him down as he started to freak out saying they can’t take off his blazer and that Big madam will be mad. Begging and pleading them not to, they were all stunned Suzuya the boy with a smile on his face always was panicking at the mirror thought of his jacket being taken off. Nakarai somehow managed to calm him down enough to lie him back down on Hanbee’s bed. Suzuya frowned and made them promise that whatever they saw on him they wouldn’t tell anyone. His breath still hot and heavy as the fever took over him and put him to sleep. Hanbee started to cry after he went to sleep not liking seeing Suzuya in so much emotion anguish. Tamaki removed Suzuya blazer slowly showing ton and tons of bruises, scars, and cuts way too much to count. It made all of them sick to there stomach, Tamaki started to tear up and Nakarai pushed him away and removed Suzuya’s crisp white short sleeved turtle neck shirt showing his chest which was even worse then his arms there were so many bruise it was sickening. He also had a ton of hickeys, and bite marks, plus purple hand prints on his hips with fingernail diggings prints that were so hard it broke skin. Tamaki went to the bathroom and threw up while Hanbee just looked away and cried, Nakarai called Mikage over and they put a cold rag on his forehead. Nakarai attended to Suzuya fresher wounds, While Mikage lead both Tamaki and Hanbee out of the room per Nakarai’s request. When Mikage walked back in and looked at Suzuya again he made a sad comment and Nakarai agreed with him silently nodding he had a feeling Big madam was abusing him but just not to this bad of an extent. Nakarai told Mikage to take a picture of Suzuya’s bruises and he did. The chapter ends with Suzuya’s fever going down and his breathing relaxing as a sense of peace washed over his body. Make this chapter Long! About 10,000 words long Key points: Uniform: The uniform was a crisp white short sleeved turtle neck shirt with plaid black pants for boys and skirts for plaid black girls, a red tie and a black uniform blazer. Academy name is CCG academy. Make sure this chapter have 300 dialogue and make it sound realistic, add extreme creative writing that follows the plot, that Suzuya always smiles, Suzuya can’t feel pain at all it just feels numb, Suzuya acts strange, Suzuya also calls big madam not by her name but calls her mama. Stop putting Suzuyas smile never wavered! Mikage only talks in astronomy language and he loves spaces. Big madam is cruel and obese while Suzuyas is small and adorable. Nakarai- 17 year old male, Junior, 167cm, extremely high intelligence, 62kg, blonde short hair, scary, cat like black eyes, loves and knows everything about birds. Mikage, high intelligence, Sophomore, 16 year old male, really short black hair black eyes, has 1 earring, 184cm, 76kg, only talks in astronomy language, loves spaces. Tamaki- Sophomore, medium intelligence, 15 year old male, brown neck length hair, brown eyes, loves video games & shopping, looks like an ordinary college student, 172cm, 66kg. Hanbee- 15 year old male, high intelligence, 190cm, 79kg, black long hair, Sophomore, white eyes, shy, adores Suzuya, scaredy-cat, takes care of Suzuya, always prioritizes Suzuya above all else. Go into detail about how they feel when they see Suzuya’s bruises and their emotions along with detail of Suzuya’s marks.

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