Crimson Whispers in the Blue The bullpen of the Behavioral Analysis Unit hummed with the low thrum of focused energy, a stark contrast to the grim task at hand. Unit Chief Aaron Hotchner stood before the team’s central board, a series of crime scene photos depicting a level of brutality that made even seasoned agents pause. The victims, all young women, were posed with a chilling, almost reverent care, their bodies arranged in serene tableaus that belied the violence that had ended their lives. “Alright, listen up,” Hotchner’s voice, gravelly and authoritative, cut through the murmur. “We have three victims in three weeks, all within a thirty-mile radius of the I-95 corridor in Virginia. The unsub is highly organized, ritualistic. He’s not just killing them; he’s creating a display.” Derek Morgan, leaning against a desk with his arms crossed, frowned. “The posing is clean, almost artistic. No signs of a struggle at the dump sites. He’s transporting them, spending time with them post-mortem.” “The ligature marks are consistent,” Dr. Spencer Reid added, his words tumbling out in a rapid, informative stream. “A half-inch nylon rope, commercially available. But the cause of death is exsanguination. He’s draining them, and forensics confirms he’s keeping the blood. The ritualistic element suggests he may believe he’s purifying them, or perhaps preserving their essence.” Emily Prentiss, studying the photos with a sharp eye, pointed to one of the images. “He’s washing them. Their hair is clean, their skin. There’s a maternal, caretaker aspect warring with the profound violence. He sees them as sullied and is cleansing them for his… collection.” Jennifer Jareau, from her post near Hotchner, summarized for the report she’d soon be distributing. “So we’re looking for a white male, late twenties to forties, with a private space where he can hold his victims and perform these rituals. He likely has a career that affords him control or involves cleanliness—a mortuary assistant, a janitor, a detail-oriented tradesperson.” The door to the bullpen swung open, and Penelope Garcia burst in, a whirlwind of colorful fabric and urgency, her heels clicking a staccato rhythm on the floor. “My tech-wizards and I have been scouring the databases, and we’ve got a potential geographic profile. The epicenter seems to be a public park in Arlington, a popular spot for college students and young adults. It’s a hunting ground.” “Good work, Garcia,” Hotchner said. “Morgan, Prentiss, I want you at the park. Blend in, observe. Reid, dig deeper into the ritualistic symbolism. JJ, coordinate with local PD. Dave, you’re with me; we’ll re-interview the families, see if there’s a connection we missed.” As the team dispersed, a figure stepped hesitantly into the space they had just vacated. The shift in the room’s atmosphere was palpable, a sudden, quiet intake of breath. It was Anastasia. She seemed to absorb the light, a vision of dark, enchanting allure that momentarily stalled the grim proceedings. Her hair was a cascade of scarlet, a river of blood-red silk that fell in soft waves around a face of flawless porcelain. Her eyes, a striking, crystalline blue, were wide and held a gentle curiosity. Full, glossed lips curved into a shy, dimpled smile as she tucked a strand of that brilliant hair behind a delicate ear. Dressed in a thin, navy blue tank top with spaghetti straps that clung to her slim, toned frame, and simple black cotton shorts, she was a study in contrasts—both adorable and profoundly sensual. Her defined waist and the soft curve of her hips were emphasized by her simple outfit, and her petite stature made her seem even more youthful than her eighteen years. “Um, excuse me?” Her voice was as soft as a sunbeam, a bubbly, gentle tone that filled the space. “I was told to report here? My social worker said the FBI had some questions for me?” Garcia, who had been packing her laptop, looked up and her jaw nearly dropped. “Oh, my glittery goddess. Hello, sunshine. You must be Anastasia. I’m Penelope Garcia, the magical oracle of this den of handsome profilers.” Anastasia’s smile widened, a genuine, humble gesture that lit up her entire face. “It’s so nice to meet you. This place is… impressive.” Hotchner and Rossi, who had been about to leave, turned. Hotchner’s expression was unreadable, but Rossi offered a kind, avuncular smile. “Anastasia? I’m SSA David Rossi, and this is Unit Chief Aaron Hotchner. We appreciate you coming in. We understand you frequent Jameson Park?” Anastasia nodded, her red waves bouncing softly. “Yes, sir. Almost every day. I like to read there. It’s peaceful.” From his desk, Spencer Reid watched her, his analytical mind whirring. Her posture was open, non-threatening. The cadence of her speech suggested high intelligence and a lack of guile. She exuded an aura of pure, unadulterated sunshine, a stark antithesis to the darkness they were hunting. “We’re investigating some incidents in that area,” Hotchner explained, his voice carefully neutral. “We’d like you to be extra cautious. We can have an agent accompany you if you plan to go back.” Before Anastasia could respond, Morgan and Prentiss re-entered, having grabbed their go-bags. “Woah,” Morgan breathed, stopping in his tracks. He offered her his most charming smile. “Hey there. Derek Morgan.” “Hi,” Anastasia replied, her cheeks flushing a delicate pink that complemented her subtle blush. “I’m Anastasia.” Prentiss gave a small, professional smile, though her eyes were assessing. “Emily Prentiss. You’re the witness?” “I guess so,” Anastasia said softly. “I just go to the park to read.” Reid finally approached, a book on comparative religious symbology tucked under his arm. “The statistical probability of being targeted in a public space like Jameson Park, while low, increases for individuals who exhibit a pattern of predictable, solitary behavior. Your routine could make you a potential target for a hunter-type offender.” Anastasia blinked her striking blue eyes, taking in the rapid-fire information. “Oh. I… I never thought of that. You’re very smart.” Reid adjusted his tie, a slight, pleased flush on his own cheeks. “I have an IQ of 187, an eidetic memory, and can read 20,000 words per minute.” “That’s incredible,” she said, her admiration seeming utterly genuine and humble. Hotchner intervened, the case pressing on his mind. “Anastasia, until we have this individual in custody, we are assigning you a protective detail. Morgan, Prentiss, you’re on the park detail. Anastasia, you’ll go with them, but you are to stay in their sight at all times. Understood?” “Yes, sir. Thank you, sir,” she said, her voice a soft whisper of gratitude. The scene at Jameson Park was deceptively tranquil. Sunlight dappled through the old oak trees, and the air was filled with the sounds of chirping birds and distant laughter. Anastasia sat on a blanket, a book of poetry open in her lap, her scarlet hair a vibrant splash of color against the green grass. She looked every bit the angelic figure her description promised, a beacon of innocence and light. Morgan and Prentiss flanked her from a discreet distance, pretending to be a couple on a stroll, their eyes constantly scanning the environment. “She’s like a walking target,” Morgan muttered to Prentiss, his protective instincts on high alert. “That hair, that… everything. If our guy is looking for an angel to ‘purify,’ she fits the profile perfectly.” “I know,” Prentiss agreed quietly. “He’s here. I can feel it. He’s watching the show.” Back at the BAU, the pieces were finally clicking into place. Garcia’s voice came through the comms, sharp with excitement. “Boy Wonder was right! The ritualistic washing, the bloodletting—it’s a perversion of an obscure purification rite from a defunct religious sect. The sect believed that scarlet-haired women were vessels for celestial energy! Our unsub isn’t just cleaning them; he’s trying to harvest their ‘purity’!” Reid’s voice followed, breathless. “And the geographic profile was wrong. The epicenter isn’t the park itself; it’s the water treatment facility adjacent to it. He works there! He has access to industrial cleaning supplies and, more importantly, complete privacy.” Hotchner’s voice was a command over the radio. “Morgan, Prentiss, get Anastasia out of there now. The unsub is Leonard Fisk, a supervisor at the Arlington Water Reclamation Plant. He’s likely on his lunch break, which is why he’s at the park scouting.” At that moment, Anastasia looked up from her book, her sensitive nature picking up on the sudden tension in her guardians. Her blue eyes widened as she saw a man in a maintenance worker’s uniform walking purposefully toward a secluded grove of trees, a large duffel bag in his hand. He was staring directly at a solitary girl with brown hair, his gaze intense and predatory. Without a second thought, driven by a selfless courage that belied her soft-spoken nature, Anastasia stood up. “Hey!” she called out, her voice clear and bright, cutting through the park’s ambience. “Excuse me, sir? I think you dropped this.” She held up a non-existent item, her entire being a distraction. The man, Leonard Fisk, froze, his attention ripped from his intended victim and locked onto the stunning girl with the blood-red hair—the ultimate prize his twisted ritual demanded. Morgan and Prentiss were already moving. “Anastasia, get down!” Morgan yelled, his weapon drawn as he identified himself as FBI. Fisk’s eyes glinted with a mad fervor. He saw Anastasia not as a person, but as the perfect, angelic vessel. He dropped his bag and lunged toward her. But Anastasia didn’t flinch. She stood her ground, a petite, sensual silhouette against the green, her angelic face set with a determination that shocked both agents. As Fisk reached for her, Prentiss tackled him from the side, bringing him to the ground with a grunt, while Morgan swiftly cuffed him, his body shielding Anastasia. It was over in seconds. Later, back at the Quantico headquarters, the team decompressed. The unsub was in custody, his "sanctuary" at the water plant yielding a treasure trove of evidence. Anastasia was giving her final statement to JJ, her voice still soft but steady. “I just couldn’t let him get to that other girl. I had to do something.” JJ smiled warmly. “You were incredibly brave, Anastasia. You saved a life today.” As she prepared to leave, the team gathered to see her off. Garcia gave her a tight, sparkly hug. “You, my crimson-haired angel, are officially my new favorite person.” Morgan winked. “You’ve got guts, kid. I like it.” Reid adjusted his sleeves. “Your actions, while statistically risky, were morally commendable and ultimately tactically sound as a diversion.” Rossi patted her shoulder gently. “You have a good heart.” Even Hotchner offered a rare, slight smile. “Thank you for your help, Anastasia. Stay safe.” Anastasia looked at each of them, her dimples showing as she beamed, a ball of sunshine once more, her dark allure now intertwined with the undeniable light of a hero. “Thank you, all of you. For everything.” And as she walked away, her scarlet hair flowing behind her like a banner, she left an indelible mark on the entire BAU team—a reminder that even in their world of profound darkness, angels could indeed walk among them.

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original character Anastasia is gonna be Alison Botha (so don’t mention Alison because her new name is Anastasia.) Write a fanfic. (mention ALL characters make it LONG and DETAILED)( AND DONT ASK ME ANY QUESTION JUST WRITE FANFIC) Criminal Minds x oc. (Characters: Aaron Hotchner Spencer Reid Derek Morgan Emily Prentiss Jennifer Jareau Penelope Garcia David Ross) Anastasia is 18, She exudes an air of dark, enchanting allure—her long, flowing scarlet blood red hair cascading in soft waves around a porcelain face. Her full, glossy lips with soft dimples on her cheek and striking blue eyes create a captivating contrast, framed by delicately defined lashes and subtle blush. Dressed in a navy blue thin tight low cut tank top with spaghetti straps, and thin black cotton booty shorts. She is a girl with the looks and personality of an Angel. She has a slim and toned figure. She has a defined waist, and her outfit emphasizes her curves. Shes usually shorter than people her age and adorable and sensual. Shes soft spoken bubbly and a ball of sunshine as well as really humble. The BAU is on a new case ….

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