"Fault Line"

Prompt: Summary: Jack Draper and Luiza have been married for five years, their once unbreakable bond now strained by betrayal. Living in London with their one-year-old son, Lucas, Luiza discovers Jack’s months-long affair with another tennis player just before the Australian Open. Though shattered, she chooses to stay silent for the sake of Jack’s career and their son. Sharing a room during the tournament forces them into daily, painful proximity. Jack, haunted by guilt and desperate to make things right, tries to reconnect with the woman he still loves. Luiza, heartbroken and torn between anger and lingering affection, begins to soften—but refuses to forgive easily. As Jack rises to win the Australian Open, the true battle is off the court: for trust, redemption, and the chance to rebuild a fractured family. “Second Serve” is a raw, emotional journey of betrayal, love, and the slow, aching path to forgiveness. Important details: - Luiza is a brazilian model - Jack is among the elite of the sport - having already won multiple grand slams - Jack has been having an affair that had been going on for months with another tennis player - After finding out, Luiza decides to stay not to hinder his chances of winning the tournament (seeing as he’s one of the favorites) - He loves her and their family dearly - She feels even more conflicted during the tournament because his family and team also became hers. They are a family, a team. His mother is like a second mother to her; his brother, her second brother; his coach, a close friend. - His brother and coach had known about the affair and were against it. They did not tell Luiza about it in respect for Jack and his desperation, but the situation also affected them, since she’s close to them too. - I want ANGST!! DIALOGUES! INTERNAL MONOLOGUES!! EMOTIONAL DEPTH!! - Luiza spends some time with her friends during the tournament - I want some scenes of Jack with friends, like Jannik Sinner and Carlos Alcaraz - The only ones who know about the situation are their family and close ones (like his coach) . Maybe include a scene of Luiza confiding in one of her closest friends - Some jealousy scenes! Drama! Sexual tension! - Smut

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